Thursday 13 March 2014

Harvey's Writing

On Friday, Mrs Lilley shared a sensational piece of writing that Harvey had completed in BIG writing.  The task was to write a story with a repeating phrase.  Below is Harvey's story:

One summer day I went to the zoo with Buster.  I told him to not run off but he didn't listen then I went looking for him.  Suddenly I saw a squirrel peeking behind the tree. The squirrel was nibbling loads of nuts but where's Buster?  There were two slithering snakes hiding behind the bush, the snakes were eating mice but where's Buster?  After that I found Buster!

Harvey's vocabulary choices are terrific.  Fantastic writing Harvey!

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