Wednesday, 5 February 2014

Writing Week at the Woods

Yesterday, Years 5 & 6 visited the woods as inspiration for their descriptive writing.  The results are fantastic; evidenced here in Oscar's work:



"When we finally arrived at the woods we split into two teams.  The hunt began.  One of the first things I saw was a piece of emerald green moss that grew on dilapidated branches.  I picked it, with my stone-cold hands, which smelt like fresh soil that had been placed in a plant pot. I was treading through the mud that suddenly became black quick-sand."


Not only was Oscar's work brilliantly descriptive, but his handwriting is looking tremendous too!  

Keep up the excellent work Oscar.

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